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A Dampened Ardor explained

A fire rages through Chinatown in Bakersfield, defying heavy rain.

What happens

A fire rages through Chinatown in Bakersfield, defying heavy rain. When an elderly preacher suggests turning the streams onto the flames, the firemen resent his interference and retaliate by dousing him instead, killing him.

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  • Setup
  • Escalation
  • Breaking point
  • Aftermath
  • Closing

The emotional and psychological peak occurs when the speaker’s obsessive pursuit of the divine rose fragrance…

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    The narrator describes the fire and the fate of the preacher.

Key passages

  • “The Chinatown at Bakersfield Was blazing bright and high; The flames to water would not yield, Though torrents drenched the sky And drowned the ground for miles around⁠— The houses were so dry.”

    A fire in Bakersfield's Chinatown burned intensely despite heavy rain, because the buildings were extremely dry.

    Sets the scene of a stubborn fire.

  • “Then rose an aged preacher man Whom all did much admire, Who said: “To force on you my plan I truly don’t aspire, But streams, it seems, might quench these beams If turned upon the fire.””

    An admired old preacher suggested that the firemen could use the rain to put out the fire.

    The preacher offers a reasonable suggestion.

  • “The fireman said: “This hoary wight His folly dares to thrust On us ! ’Twere well he felt our might⁠— Nay, he shall feel our must!” With jet of wet and small regret They laid that old man’s dust.”

    The firemen, angered by the preacher's advice, turned their hose on him and killed him without remorse.

    The firemen murder the preacher for his impertinence.