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XIII: Off the Map explained

Dane, Ali, and the crew discover that the mysterious pests aboard the Queen are native to Sargol, having stowed away in the red wood cargo.

What happens

Dane, Ali, and the crew discover that the mysterious pests aboard the Queen are native to Sargol, having stowed away in the red wood cargo. Using the Hoobat Queex's siren song to lure the camouflaged creatures, they capture several with sleep rays and nets. Ali theorizes the pests' venom may be the source of the crew's illness, and Jasper Weeks deliberately infects himself to test the theory. As Weeks falls ill, Rip sets a course for Terra, avoiding Patrol detection, while the crew races to prove the ship is not plague-ridden.

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Narrative arc

Story tension across the book — this chapter sits in Falling action.

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  • Setup
  • Breaking point
  • Aftermath
  • Closing

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Themes in this chapter

  • Survival and Ingenuity

    The crew uses the Hoobat's natural abilities and sleep rays to capture the pests, and Weeks self-infects to gather critical data.

  • Science and Medicine

    Ali's analysis of the pest's venom and Weeks' deliberate infection serve as a grim medical experiment to identify the plague's cause.

  • Loyalty and Camaraderie

    Weeks sacrifices his own safety for the crew, and the team works together under extreme pressure to save the ship.

Characters to notice

  • Dane Thorson

    Breaks the official seal on the cargo hold, inspects the red wood, and uses his sleep rod to subdue the pests.

  • Ali Kamil

    Helps open the cargo panel, counts the pests, and theorizes that the creatures' venom causes the illness.

  • Rip Shannon

    Acts as acting-commander, orders the deep freeze for captured pests, and sets the course for Terra.

  • Jasper Weeks

    Nets a pest and deliberately infects himself with the contaminated lancet to test the plague theory.

  • Queex

    The Hoobat uses its siren song to lure the pests out of hiding and kills one with its claws.

  • Sinbad

    The ship's cat shows fear and aggression toward the pests, snarling and avoiding Weeks.

Key passages

  • “It took only a second for Dane to commit an act which, if he could not defend it later, would blacklist him out of space. He twisted off the official seal which should remain there while the freighter was space borne.”

    Dane risked his career by breaking the official seal on the cargo hold, an act that could get him blacklisted from space travel.

    Highlights the high-stakes decision to investigate the cargo.

  • “Weeks leaned over and twitched the lancet out of Ali's fingers. Then, before any of them could move, he thrust its contaminated point into the back of his hand.”

    Weeks took the initiative to infect himself with the pest's venom to test if it causes the illness.

    Demonstrates Weeks' bravery and the crew's desperation for answers.