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Mr. Marble

A suburban clerk whose sudden wealth and quiet desperation make him dangerous, especially to anyone who notices what he keeps in the garden.

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Also known as William Marble, Old Marble, V Mr. Marble, VI Mr. Marble, young Marble

First appearance: I

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William Marble has climbed from pinched respectability to gilt furniture, gold cigarette cases, and a bowler hat his neighbours resent. But his new money is shadowed by a secret he guards with a jealousy that frightens…

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Character Web

13 connections

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MMMrs. MarbleAMAnnie MarbleSASaundersCOCollinsMHMr. HendersonMMMr. Marble

Relationship types

  • Family
  • Professional
  • Rivalry

Character groups

  • Protagonist
  • Marble family circle
  • Marble's professional contacts

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Narrative arc

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SetupEscalationAftermathClimax
  • Setup
  • Escalation
  • Breaking point
  • Aftermath
  • Closing

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