King Coal · Character
Alf Raymond
A young miner who works with Hal.
minor
Also known as Alf, Raymond
First appearance: i
Alf Raymond shows up with force in VII. The page is where that presence becomes real.
Sheriff of Pedro County, referred to as the head of the 'Empire of Raymond,' involved in ballot stuffing and liquor business.
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In VII: Sheriff of Pedro County, referred to as the head of the 'Empire of Raymond,' involved in ballot stuffing and liquor business.
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Relationship types
- Other
Character groups
- Union activists and allies
- Mine management and antagonists
- Protagonist
- Minor miners and community members
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Story tension across the book — this chapter sits in Exposition.
- Setup
- Escalation
- Breaking point
- Aftermath
- Closing
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