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The Best Laid Plans explained

William Brown agrees to help Mr.

What happens

William Brown agrees to help Mr. French woo his sister Ethel in exchange for white rats. He feigns illness to get out of shopping, then uses the rats to create chaos—first in church, then in Ethel's bedroom. Mr. French bribes William repeatedly to keep the disasters quiet, while William enjoys the profits at a fair.

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SetupAftermathClimax
  • Setup
  • Breaking point
  • Aftermath
  • Closing

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Themes in this chapter

Characters to notice

  • William Brown

    Manipulates Mr. French for white rats and money, causes chaos with the rats in church and at home.

  • Ethel Brown

    Object of Mr. French's affection; terrified by the rat in her bedroom.

  • Mr. French

    Infatuated with Ethel, bribes William repeatedly to cover up rat-related disasters.

  • Jumble

    William's dog; accompanies him to the fair and is involved in rat training.

  • Mr. Brown

    Angry father who threatens to wring the rats' necks after the church and bedroom incidents.

  • Mrs. Brown

    Anxious mother who scolds William for his behavior and the rat escapades.

Key passages

  • “She's—she's a real Botticelli”

    Mr. French compares Ethel to a Botticelli painting, expressing his admiration.

    Mr. French's romantic idealization of Ethel.

  • “White rats”

    William's immediate answer when asked what he wants most in the world.

    William's simple desire for pets drives the plot.

  • “I can't walk any more, Ethel”

    William fakes illness to get out of carrying parcels.

    William's manipulative tactic to avoid shopping.

  • “It was pulling at my hair. It just sat there with its pink nose and long tail. It was perfectly horrible!”

    Ethel's terrified description of the rat on her pillow.

    Climax of the rat chaos in Ethel's bedroom.

  • “What'll you give me not to?”

    William's repeated bribe demand to keep secrets from his family.

    William's entrepreneurial spirit in exploiting Mr. French.