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Halo Tarrant reflects on her husband Lewis's editorial venture with The Hour and her hopes for Vance Weston's literary future.

What happens

Halo Tarrant reflects on her husband Lewis's editorial venture with The Hour and her hopes for Vance Weston's literary future. Lewis returns from Boston with a new manuscript by Vance, titled 'Unclaimed,' which Halo reads and defends against Lewis's reservations about its quiet, old-fashioned style. George Frenside visits, and the conversation turns to the story's merits and the direction of the magazine.

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Story tension across the book — this chapter sits in Exposition.

SetupEscalationAftermathClimax
  • Setup
  • Escalation
  • Breaking point
  • Aftermath
  • Closing

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Themes in this chapter

Characters to notice

  • Halo Tarrant

    Reflects on her role as monitress and muse to Vance, reads his new manuscript, and defends it against her husband's criticism.

  • Lewis Tarrant

    Returns from Boston with Vance's manuscript, expresses reservations about its quiet style, and appropriates Halo's opinions as his own.

  • Vance Weston

    Submits a new story 'Unclaimed' to The Hour, written quickly after arriving in New York.

  • George Frenside

    Visits the Tarrants, discusses Vance's work and the direction of The Hour.

  • Myra Larcom

    Mentioned as the protagonist of Vance's story 'Unclaimed,' a prairie beauty engaged to a soldier killed in France.

  • Ben Purchase

    Mentioned as Myra's fiancé who is killed at the front in Vance's story.

Key passages

  • “She reflected, not ill-humouredly, that it would be easier for Lewis to get through with the business of appropriating her opinions if she stayed out of hearing while he was doing it”

    Halo thought, without resentment, that it would be simpler for Lewis to take credit for her ideas if she wasn't present to hear him do it.

    Highlights Halo's awareness of Lewis's habit of presenting her thoughts as his own.

  • “If he keeps up to this standard he may be the making of The Hour ; and when he finds himself an important literary figure he’ll take a different view of his future. We’re not likely ever to hear of his engagement again”

    If Vance continues at this level, he could become the success of The Hour, and once he's a literary figure, he'll reconsider his engagement.

    Shows Halo's hope that Vance's career will supersede his personal commitments.

  • “Why not try giving your readers the exact opposite of what all the other on-the-spot editors are straining to provide? Something quiet, logical, Jane Austen-y … obvious, almost?”

    Halo suggests publishing something deliberately understated and traditional as a counterpoint to the sensationalism of other magazines.

    Illustrates Halo's editorial vision for The Hour.