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XXI: Touching Repayment explained

Dom Manuel, having served Misery for a month of years, is offered repayment.

What happens

Dom Manuel, having served Misery for a month of years, is offered repayment. He rejects happiness and instead demands the return of Niafer from the dead. With the help of Misery's power and the magical knowledge he gained from Alianora and Freydis, Manuel fashions a new body for Niafer from white earth and the tears of the two royal ladies, binding Misery's head in their handkerchiefs to complete the resurrection.

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Narrative arc

Story tension across the book — this chapter sits in Rising action.

SetupEscalationClimax
  • Setup
  • Escalation
  • Breaking point
  • Aftermath
  • Closing

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Themes in this chapter

  • The Geas of Obligation

    Manuel's driving force is the obligation he feels toward Niafer, whose life was given to preserve his own.

  • Love and Disillusionment

    Manuel's love for Niafer is portrayed as powerful yet doomed, with Misery predicting that the resurrected love will ultimately lead to disillusionment.

  • The Inevitability of Misery

    Misery asserts that he will eventually overcome Manuel's love, returning as a formless cloud to whisper common-sense and bring low the love that defied death.

Characters to notice

  • Dom Manuel

    Manuel negotiates with Misery for Niafer's return, using knowledge from Alianora and Freydis to fashion a new body for her.

  • The Head of Misery

    Misery repays Manuel's service by aiding in the resurrection of Niafer, though he warns of future disillusionment.

  • Niafer

    Manuel's beloved slave girl, now a ghost in her pagan paradise, whom Manuel seeks to bring back to life.

  • Alianora

    Manuel recalls his past love for her; her tears on a handkerchief are used in the ritual to resurrect Niafer.

  • Freydis

    Manuel recalls his past love for her; her tears on a handkerchief are used in the ritual to resurrect Niafer.

Key passages

  • “I have seen but one happy person. He sat in a dry ditch, displaying vacant glittering eyes, and straws were tangled in his hair, but Tom o' Bedlam was quite happy. No, it is not happiness I desire.”

    Manuel tells Misery that the only truly happy person he has ever seen was a madman in a ditch, and that he does not want such hollow happiness.

    Manuel rejects the offer of happiness, equating it with madness and emptiness.

  • “I demand that Niafer who was a slave girl, and is now a ghost in her pagan paradise.”

    Manuel demands that Misery bring back Niafer from the dead, despite her being a ghost in a non-Christian afterlife.

    Manuel's demand reveals his unwavering love and his willingness to defy death and religious boundaries.

  • “I shall have overthrown my present conqueror, and I shall have brought low the love which terror and death did not affright, and which the laws of earth could not control; and I, whom some call Béda, and others Kruchina, will very terribly attest that the ghost of outlived and conquered misery is common-sense.”

    Misery predicts that he will eventually conquer Manuel's love, reducing it to mundane common-sense and proving that even the greatest love cannot escape misery.

    Misery foreshadows the eventual disillusionment that will follow Manuel's triumph over death.