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Epigraph explained

The epigraph quotes from 'The Wallet of Kai-Lung,' suggesting a story permeated with the odor of joss-sticks and honorable high-mindedness, where the two characters are both of noble birth, and which has no real ending.

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The epigraph quotes from 'The Wallet of Kai-Lung,' suggesting a story permeated with the odor of joss-sticks and honorable high-mindedness, where the two characters are both of noble birth, and which has no real ending.

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Narrative arc

Story tension across the book — this chapter sits in Exposition.

SetupEscalationClimax
  • Setup
  • Escalation
  • Breaking point
  • Aftermath
  • Closing

The emotional peak occurs when the Duke’s stubborn refusal to speak is overridden by the sudden, disruptive ar…

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Themes in this chapter

Key passages

  • “The inimitable stories of Tong-king never have any real ending, and this one, being in his most elevated style, has even less end than most of them.”

    The unique tales of Tong-king always lack a proper conclusion, and this particular story, written in his finest manner, has even less of an ending than usual.

    Sets up the expectation of an open-ended narrative.

  • “But the whole narrative is permeated with the odour of joss-sticks and honourable high-mindedness, and the two characters are both of noble birth.”

    The entire story is filled with the scent of incense and a sense of noble virtue, and both main characters come from aristocratic families.

    Introduces themes of nobility and honor.